Part of my Story.

I've been thinking fo writing a story for a while, but didnt et any ideas, until i had a dream the othe night. It as very scary but gave me a great story starter. This is what I have so far :D


I heard a distant scream. It echoed against the trees. The scream was scared, but very throaty like the person had been screaming for a while. I started to run as fast as I could, towards the sound, faster, faster. Normally I would’ve just ignored it, thinking it was a child or a couple of kids having fun. But I knew better. I could hear the terror in the person’s voice, loud and clear.


My feet were a blur of blue and black, scraping against the path, leaving a trail in the wood chips. My eyes started to water from the wind and my cheeks burned with the cold. I finally came to a stop in front of a small cabin. The screaming had stopped but I was sure this was were it had come from.


I took and deep breath, staring at the knob. My mind raced with thoughts. The image of a person trapped inside here for however long crossed my mind. Maybe they had gone missing.
I shook my head, shaking away the image and reached toward the door knob. My hand was shaking with fear and a cold sweat had broken across my forehead. A piercing shriek knocked me back, making me jump back, hitting my head against a tree. I gulped; it was so loud, so close.Maybe they were just behind the door, waiting for me to open. Maybe it had heard me, and now it was safe.

I walked slowly up to the door, my hands clenching into balls in front of me. I reached out toward the door, slowly turning the knob. The door swung open and a shrill laughter filled my ears. I felt myself being pushing inside, but felt another body brush up against mine.

A deep rumbled built in the back of my throat and worked it way up, coming out of my mouth as a scream. I turned around, throwing my body against the door to open it, hearing the same laugh, this time it was evil, almost happy. I screamed again throwing my body against the door with all my weight.

I was trapped. Alone. Cold. I needed to get out, soon.


Thats what happened in my dream, but it may not sound that scary. I don't have much time to post but I tell you a little about the story.

Like me the person in the story is having a dream. I plan on making her dream like a vision but that happens waaaay later in the story.

Anyways, I wanted some suggestion on maybe how I can improve my writing, if you like it or not, on maybe somthing i can add onto it! Thats it for now, Bye!

Another Twilight Blog :o

This is going to be hard to admit, but I must say it. I AM A JACOB BLACK FANGIRL! o.O

Okay phew, got that out of my system! I just finished reading eclipse and i think it is a super duper awesome book!! Except Bella is marrying Edward! Phooey...

I've been watching a lot of youtube videos about how to annoy Edward and these are some of my favorites.

1 Ask him how old he is.

2Then drop your jaw and say 'Oh my GAWD your OLD!'

2 stab him with a pencil (teehee)

3 Show him a picture of Robert Pattinson and luagh at the resemblance

4 Watch Harry Potter and when Cedric appears scream 'CEDWARD!'

5 Wear a Team Jacob shirt

6 Make him wear a Team Jacob shirt.

7 Tell him you think his piano playing is horrible and that he must be tone deaf

8 Imagine his brothers naked while following him around.

9 Ask him for a blood donation

10 Tell him 'you' know what Bella's thinking

11Everytime you see a car, jump infront of it and scream at him to save you.

12 Tell him that you saw him and Jacob sneaking around at night

13 Wink at him when you say number 12

14 Throw garlic at him, screaming 'DIE DIE DIE!!'

Tehee :3 Those are my FAVORITE! Yet once again, no offence to Edward lovers.

Gotta go now! BYYYEE GUUUYYSS